My visual composition is about protecting and cleaning up the Rouge River. I am promoting this to high school students because I believe that they are the future and can decide to help promote a cleaner river system for their kids and for their kid’s kids. We have to start this project now and with the help of the youth we can do wonders.
I am trying to advocate for a cleaner river system in Michigan, the Rouge River, and am asking high school students to help. I believe they can help the most and help promote the biggest change in our problem of pollution. Today’s day and age is growing fast and if we can get them to help with our problem it will help our cause grow with them and make our solution to pollution that much easier. If we can get enough students to help we can cover more zones of the river and make our effort that much more effective. I believe that my visual composition is going to help draw the attention of young people because it explains a lot not only about the river but also about how pollution affects us and the wildlife. I believe that high school students out of anyone would want to control their own future and if they help now they have the chance to decide how our river system ends up. Another informative part of my visual composition are the pictures, they show the river at its worst and at its best, I believe that this shows young people that if we don’t act soon on stopping this pollution it could really get out of hand and start affecting more than just the areas it surrounds. I believe that only this information should be efficient enough to give young people ambition to help out their community. And the goals I talk about in my visual composition are not hard to reach at all, they just take some time so if we can get any help from some high school students I think that our goals will be reached especially for our city of Dearborn Heights.
Our goal of helping out our river system is dependent on the youth of Michigan, and I believe they will come through because if I didn’t think they would then I wouldn’t be targeting them to help out the most. With the strength of our youth and the potential of my project I believe that this can turn into something great and that’s why I am putting so much effort into this project, all I need is a little help to make this happen, so I am counting on the youth of Michigan to give me a hand.
I am trying to advocate for a cleaner river system in Michigan, the Rouge River, and am asking high school students to help. I believe they can help the most and help promote the biggest change in our problem of pollution. Today’s day and age is growing fast and if we can get them to help with our problem it will help our cause grow with them and make our solution to pollution that much easier. If we can get enough students to help we can cover more zones of the river and make our effort that much more effective. I believe that my visual composition is going to help draw the attention of young people because it explains a lot not only about the river but also about how pollution affects us and the wildlife. I believe that high school students out of anyone would want to control their own future and if they help now they have the chance to decide how our river system ends up. Another informative part of my visual composition are the pictures, they show the river at its worst and at its best, I believe that this shows young people that if we don’t act soon on stopping this pollution it could really get out of hand and start affecting more than just the areas it surrounds. I believe that only this information should be efficient enough to give young people ambition to help out their community. And the goals I talk about in my visual composition are not hard to reach at all, they just take some time so if we can get any help from some high school students I think that our goals will be reached especially for our city of Dearborn Heights.
Our goal of helping out our river system is dependent on the youth of Michigan, and I believe they will come through because if I didn’t think they would then I wouldn’t be targeting them to help out the most. With the strength of our youth and the potential of my project I believe that this can turn into something great and that’s why I am putting so much effort into this project, all I need is a little help to make this happen, so I am counting on the youth of Michigan to give me a hand.
I really liked the idea of this project and I think it is definitely a worthwhile subject. A point you made that I thought was really good is that all this would cost is a little time and energy. Moreover, we would be improving our environment and educating high school students in the process. You could improve the essay by being more specific about the project goals and what exactly needs to be done.
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